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svn:author
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trhodes
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svn:date
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2002-10-05T02:15:42.000000Z
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svn:log
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Grammar nits.  Remove dead words and redundant sentences.  Reword a few areas to remove the
'you' which appeared in almost every other line.  One quick markup fix.

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