K 10 svn:author V 4 ceri K 8 svn:date V 27 2003-09-07T14:49:26.000000Z K 7 svn:log V 236 o Change one usage of "i.e." to "e.g." where it makes more sense, and remove an unnecessary colon. o If X is the chief weakness of something, then it actually is the most important one. Remove some confusing text from a sentence. END