K 10 svn:author V 6 murray K 8 svn:date V 27 2001-07-17T21:35:41.000000Z K 7 svn:log V 464 Wrap author attribution in . Reword a couple of run-on sentences to use better subject-verb agreement. Terminate all items in a list with a period, not just some of them. Add and tags as appropriate. "pw(8) has the information" doesn't look well without the benefits of a hyperlink. Reword this to: "For more information, please see pw(8)." Update example to change shells to zsh since tcsh is now in the base system. END